Monday, March 12, 2012

The Last Few Minutes!

Suddenly she was jerked back to consciousness!
It was a small room, the air was damp! She was suffocating.
“How did I come here? Am I still alive? Did someone kidnap me?”
She couldn't remember anything clearly.

A woman was screaming! Someone was torturing her! She could hear male voices!
There was no light in the room. Terrified, she tried to sit.
No use! She couldn't move an inch.
The screaming became louder and louder. She could hear her heart pounding faster.
Just then she discovered a source of light!
- “Perhaps, that's the only way out.” she thought.
Desperately she started crawling but it was a waste of effort.
She didn't remember anything else.

The next time she woke up, she was in a bigger room and lights were on!
A man was carrying her in his arms.
Then she heard a female voice.

- “Congratulations dear! You have become a father!”


  1. Funny ! As I started reading I thought it would be about rape drug or something.

    Keep writing.

    Aditya Bhasin

    1. Hey Aditya :) Well, that was the whole intention of the post! First I decided to kill the baby girl, but then changed my mind. Glad you liked it. Hope to see you again!

      Best Regards

  2. Wow!! The suspense was just a bit too much. Wonderful style!!