Wednesday, March 7, 2012

B(ring) Him Back!


The number you are trying to call is switched off.


This is the fifth time she heard the same thing.

Perhaps he is in a meeting or talking with his boss.

What if he is with another girl?

She couldn’t think anymore!


The number you are trying to call is switched off.


She was getting desperate.

He never did something like this.

He is supposed to drive back home! An accident…?

“Oh God! No! What am I thinking?” She forcefully changed her thoughts!


The number you are trying to call is switched off.


She couldn’t control her tears.

Something must have happened. She didn’t know whom to call.


The number you are trying to call is switched off.


The number you are trying to call is switched off.


The number you are trying to call...


Suddenly her phone rang! It was him! Thank God!

- “Hello?”

“Why are you giving me random miscalls for the last two hours?”

She broke down with tears. Does he even know how tensed she was?

“Your… your ph was switched off!”

A short pause, then he burst into laughter!

“I told you today not to choose that weird caller tune for me!”

8 comments:

  1. o god!! that was unexpected and hilarious dude! U rocked :-) keep it up

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  2. May sound a little harsh but it's not funny at all. Why girls every time?

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    1. No hard feelings! I can write anything if the plot requires :)

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  3. That was really hilarious. Totally unexpected finish. Do you create the images also that go with the posts? They seem to fit so appropriately.

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    1. Hey! Actually I do create some of the images but not all. Some of them are my own paintings. Glad you liked the end so much... even i was not sure about the climax when I was writing it. :)

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