Tuesday, February 28, 2012

And Let There Be Light!

1, 2, 3...

“Hey what are you doing?” She asked!

7, 8... counting words! Can't you hear?

But, you are counting numbers!

It's all the same... 15, 16, 17, 18...

I can't see anything! Stop counting and let me open my eyes.

22, 23, 24, 25, 26...

Hey! I'm talking to you.

Shut up and let me count... 33, 34, 35...

Jack? What kind of surprise is this? What are you doing?

Shhh... 42, 43, 44, 45, 46, 47, 48...

If this is another one of those silly trick of yours, I'm gonna kill you!

51, 52, 53...

Fine! Go on...

57, 58, 59...


Open your eyes!

She hesitantly opened her eyes very slowly.

“Oh Jack! I can see again! She cried out with joy. I can't believe it! I can...

She couldn't speak anymore. His two eyes were covered with bandage but he was smiling. That charming old smile she saw 11 years back before that car accident...

JACK!!! She screamed! Why did you do this?????? And broke down with tears.

Shhh... he touched her lips with his finger and whispered gently - “I wanted to write a short story in just one minute! Thank you for letting me complete it.”


  1. Awesome man! Words fall short to express my feeling after reading this post.

    1. Thank you Suvro! Glad you liked it :) Keep visiting buddy :)

  2. Lovely style of writing!! Hope to see you posting more often.

    1. Thank you Ramakant! Welcome to my blog :) Glad you liked the post so much. Stay tuned for more updates :)