“Ram naam satya hein”
“Ram naam satya hein”
“Ram naam satya hein”
The old man saw a little girl repeating the same lines loudly.
She looked tired, hungry, and gloomy!
He went to her.
“Hey! Are you mad? Where is the dead body?”
“What do you mean by dead body?” The little girl asked.
- “Some people came and took my father with them last week and asked me to repeat these words till someone comes!”
Very moving story! never would hv thought it possible to manage to pack it in so few words
ReplyDeleteSays the one who has a blog filled with great stuff. Thank you Suresh, glad you liked it. I love to manipulate my readers and surprise them at the end.
DeleteGloomy and so difficult for a child to go through this. Well written...
ReplyDeleteI become the central character or the sufferer of my stories. I feel the pain before jotting down :) Thanks Saru! Keep visiting.
Deletepowerfully traumatic!
ReplyDeleteThat's life :)
DeleteWow!! You manage to evoke the best of emotions in the least possible words. Fantastic post!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Ramakant. Your comments make me happy always!
DeleteSaying a lot in just a few words....
ReplyDeleteHeart-touching!!